备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：短文改错

1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tu Youyou, a famous female chemist and scientist, was been born in Zhejiang Province in 1930.

In 1951, she was admitted by Beijing University, majoring in making medicine and graduating in 1955. Since then, she has been devoted to study traditional Chinese medicine and modern western medicine. In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing Qinghaosu out of a Chinese herb cure those patients of malaria, for what she won many big awards. She is awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine on October 5th, 2015, becoming the first Chinese women scientist to win the Nobel Prize.

All of us Chinese are proudly of her and her achievements. She has indeed set the excellent example to us students.

2. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today, carnival in Venice is celebrating for five days in February. People arrive from all over Europe enjoy its fun. Hotels are full booked and the narrow streets are crowded with wonderful costumes. German, French and English seem to be the main language. But the spirit of Venice carnival is not quite the same like the great American carnivals. If the key to Rio are music and movement, then in the Venice it is the mystery of masks. As you wander through the streets, you saw thousands of masks, but you have no idea that the faces behind them look like. Nobody takes it off. If the masks come off, the magic is lost.

3. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning at about nine o'clock, I was on my way the supermarket. Suddenly I see heavy smoke rising about several hundreds meters away. "There must be a fire!" I thought. Getting nearer, I saw a shop was on fire. There was many people standing by the roadside watched. Six firefighters were struggling to put out the fire. I heard someone say they had fought for about an hour and two firefighters had rushed into the shop to rescue a woman. After a while, they rushed out support the woman. But one firefighter got injured serious. All the people and I whom saw what happened were deeply moved by their bravery. About twenty minutes late the fire was finally put out.

4. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

We all wanted to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal you must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is the power. Because we have the power, we help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study it well, we need to do sports so that we can keep good. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk before a day's study.

5. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Reading is always my favorite thing. Influencing by my parents, I began reading at a early age. I love reading books of all kind. Over the years I have got a lot of knowledge from books. Beside, books like Robinson Crusoe encourage me overcome difficulties facing me. Reading also relieve me of my loneliness. Sometimes I read at home in our spare time. At school I spend time exchange ideas with other students in the reading club. Knowing that what others read is exciting in the club. Nothing gives me much pleasure than reading.

6. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)， 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下画一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I visited Mountain Dragon with several classmate today. We arrived at the foot of Mountain Dragon on half past nine and spend nearly one hour in climbing. We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very freshly. We did not feel tiring at all. When we got to the top, and we were all wet with sweat. We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating anything. There were several temples in the mountain. Monks (僧侣) in a temple was singing. We watched for a longer time because we had never seen this before. It was really a beautiful mountain.

7. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

To enrich students school life and help us learn more about space exploration, our school organized a visit to the City Museum on the other day.

At the beginning, some pictures and videos about space exploration were shown to them. By watching them, we learned a lot about many great achievement that had been made in our country. The astronauts' devotion to the space exploration of our country leaves a deep impression on us. Afterwards, we experienced a life and work of astronauts, like how they do in our space station. All the teachers and students were very excited, try and touching everything.

Such a great success the activity that it was highly spoken of. Hopeful, there will be even more activities like this.

8. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Chelsea Hill is a respectable girl. Since the age of three, she has dreamed of be a dancer.

That ambition was nearly on an end one night in 2010. Hill, then a17-year-old high school student in Pacific Grove, California, was in a car accident, that put her in hospital for 51 day and left her paralyzed from the waist down. For most people, that will have ruined any hope of dreams. For Hill himself, it was the beginning. Although it was real tough, but Hill achieved the dream in her wheelchair. Hoping to expand her dance to help women like her, Hill moved to Los Angeles in 2014 and formed team of dancer with disabilities naming the Rollettes.

9. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）

Recently we were attracted by the activities of our school. Our class visited to the City Folk Museum last week. To begin with, we searched for as many information as possible on the Internet. Feel excited, we gathered at the entrance on Friday morning. Then the guide showed us the exhibition of paper cuts designing for different uses. After that, we watched a digital film, that made us know our folk culture better. Finally, we go to the do-it-yourself area. We learned to make some paper cut and painted a couple of fantastic masks there. We all felt it was an unforgettable experience, the museum was certain worth a visit.

10. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

When I was in primary school, I often went to the wetland of my hometown, there I could see many different kinds of animals, including wild birds, fish, snakes, insets and so on. That was an interesting place for I and my friends to watch the birds and study them. And things have begin to change in recent years. Small birds are being caught up with nets. Wild ducks are being sold at food markets. And even bad, the wetland is being destroyed. Some parts are being covered with new house. You can see rubbish everywhere. The wetland is being polluted serious every day. I am very worried it. How can we do?